英语改错

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The police in big city was searching for a thief named bill ，and they finally caught him.however,while they were taking photos of bill-from the front,from the right,without a hat,he ran away.a week later, the police received a call,which said bill had left for waterbridge,far away small town.the police at once sent four different photos of the thief to the police in waterbridge.soon the police in the city had got a call from the police in waterbridge."we have caught three of the men,"they said proudly,"and will catch the fourth this evening"

The police in a big city were searching for a thief named bill and they finally caught him.however,while they were taking photo of Bill-from the front,from the right,without a hat, he ran away.A week late, the police received a call that said bill had left for waterbridge,a far---away small town.the police at once send four different photos of the thief to the police in waterbridge.soon the police in the city had got a call from the police in waterbridge,"we have caught three of the men,"they said proudly,"and will catch the fourth this evening

The police in （a）big city was（were） searching for a thief named bill（Bill） and they finally caught him.however（However）,while（when） they were taking photo of bill-（Bill）from（in） the front,from the right,without a hat,they（he） ran away.a（A） week late（later）, the police received a call,that （which）said bill（Bill） had left for waterbridge（Waterbridge）,a far away（far-away） small town.the（The） police at once send four different photos of the thief to the police in waterbridge（Waterbridge）.soon（Soon） the police in the city had（去掉） got a call from the police in waterbridge（Waterbridge）."we have caught three of the men,"they said proud（proudly）,"and （we）will catch the four（fourth） this evening"

虽说我是英语专业的 但也改的有不当之处 见谅哈

The police in a big city were searching for a thief named Bill and they finally caught him. however,while they were taking photos of Bill-from the front,from the right,without a hat, he ran away.A week later, the police received a call that said bill had left for waterbridge,a faraway small town.the police at once sent four different photos of the thief to the police in waterbridge.soon the police in the city got a call from the police in waterbridge,"we have caught three of the men,"they said proudly,"and will catch the fourth this evening

The police in a big city were searching for a thief named bill and they finally caught him.however,while they were taking photo of Bill-from the front,from the right,without a hat, he ran away.A week late, the police received a call that said bill had left for waterbridge,a far---away small town.the police at once send four different photos of the thief to the police in waterbridge.soon the police in the city had got a call from the police in waterbridge,"we have caught three of the men,"they said proudly,"and will catch the fourth this evening" 做了一些改动